social.lol is one of the many independent Mastodon servers you can use to participate in the fediverse.
social.lol is a lighthearted social hangout for the omg.lol community.

Administered by:

Server stats:

838
active users

#writing

388 posts263 participants64 posts today

For Authors

The Fussy Librarian has helped my books to reach #1 on over thirty occasions. Promote your book. A special offer from my publisher and the Fussy Librarian. authors.thefussylibrarian.com?ref=goylake

Don’t forget to use the code goylake20 to claim your discount 🙂

they've dug the pavement up
with a grey-gap-toothed mouth

trenched the full street
pedestrians shifted to the road
under the flimsy protection
of orange plastic fences

massive spooled cable
giant cotton-reel

hi-vis men milling
amid generic vehicles
coiling cigarette smoke
sweetening generator fug

and none of us would know
if they were not supposed to be here

#SmallPoems #Poetry #Writing #MastoPrompt 4 April 2025 - lay

#WritersCoffeeClub #WCC 2504.04 — What are some tips and tricks you use to convey strong emotions?

I think this is where my use of Grammar B helps me. Strong emotions, even things like anger, I think are associated with confusion and levels of self-doubt, which leads to cycles of justification or re-evaluation on the fly, quickly, immediately, erratically. or it just might conceivably—or very possibly since MURPHY in all things, right?—get worse, far worse; that type of thing.

The last sentence is a short example of a Grammar B run-on. It is non-grammatical; your high school English teacher would grade it a Fail. What it does is breathlessly fire off thought after thought in a continuing sequence, no sequence dependent on the sequence before. It flows. Like a speech. The reader never needs to backtrack to deduce meaning. Such a construct could be cut into individual sentences, standardized. But. Why? Rhythm of any sort drives the reader forward. It creates tension. All useful when writing emotion. A flood of description to overwhelm the senses, like the emotion itself.

Another construction I think works, usually mixed carefully with the run-on to break repeating rhythms, is telegraphy. I used that in the previous paragraph. Did you. Notice? Short, non-grammatical sentences. Missing a verb, a noun, or what not. It works like a drumbeat, focusing the reader on individual word or unsupported phrase meanings—and you get extra credit if you use a word with multiple meanings that could conceivably apply in context; emotion is confusion, innit?

In a sense, Grammar B is like finding poetry in prose. Used right, it uniquely depicts emotion. This is why I call myself a "prosaist."

[Author retains copyright (c)2025 R.S.]

#BoostingIsSharing

#gender #fiction #writer #author
##writing #writingcommunity #writersOfMastodon #writers
#RSdiscussion #grammar #grammarb

Dr. Nnmandi Bello was far from home. If one could ever consider home a place and not the memories? He idly wondered if he'd ever travel far enough to lose the memories.

“This is it. The old Reva ranch.” The driver drew his attention back to the here and now.

Nnmandi had to work to get anyone to remember where the ranch was. Now, after a quarter century of rain, sun, and wind turned it to just another stretch of Mexican scrub lands.

Another place that was just memories.

Hooked by Les Edgerton - an excellent read that covers key factors towards writing openings to hook your readers. Placing it in the same league as Stephen King's On Writing. Edgerton focuses on book openings and includes advice from some prominent Agents/Publishers. Highly recommended read.
#books #writing

#WritersCoffeeClub Day4: What are some tips and tricks you use to convey strong emotions?

Word choice and character action. There are many ways to convey a character saying "I'm disappointed in you."

A mobster holding a gun at a character saying "I'm disappointed in you" is different to a mother saying that to a teenager while she's distracted by a call on her iPhone.

Something that I hate about online critic culture is the way that it discourages critical thinking, In the sense that part of being able to critically analyze a story is critical thinking. But what I feel like often happens instead is lots of people just buy and fully believe whatever their favorite online critic says. And because of that, don't critically analyze media beyond their online favorite personality has said about it

#ScribesAndMakers 2504.04 — Can you handle praise well, or do you get embarrassed and play your achievement down? CW: self-analysis

Oddly enough, this devolves to gender roles and the confusion an autistic can discover in any social illogic. As a child, I quickly evolved into a listener, observer, and a pleaser with my shyness providing me an escape route from any confrontative situation—things I worked on (had to!) as I became an adult. Wanting to be an author is not entirely compatible with these personality traits regardless of gender—there is a definite forwardness and egoist nuance to insisting on communicating one's ideas—and I couldn't rely on others to meditate for me.

I got praise growing up, especially when doing well in school. Then again, my mother had me convinced I'd die if I didn't bring home top marks. I mostly got to hide from praise. It's not that I don't, didn't, like it, but I could better process it unobserved and generally make it appropriately and comfortably undeserved. A pleaser can't accept being pleased well!

Yeah, I got help. If you've heard of EST, I did that.

Now my reaction to praise is a Venn diagram of who, what, and where. If it is online, where nobody has to see me physically react, I'm a lot more copacetic with it. In person, it can be uncomfortable. I can still find ways to minimize the input but as I get older I'm better at fairly assessing my abilities. I do remember having this one fan at conventions that would greet me. She really wanted a sequel. Maybe she sensed I was shy, I don't know. But I grew to like her reminder.

[Author retains copyright (c)2025 R.S.]

#BoostingIsSharing and #CommentingIsCool

#gender #fiction #writer #author #photographer #chef #cooking
#writing #writingcommunity #writersOfMastodon #writers
#RSdiscussion